Our first draft of our title sequence had to be made in a very limited amount of time, so what we concentrated on mainly was the editing of the shots. This meant that we negelected the titles and credits, however I feel that we have created some good scenes within this piece for a first draft.
Good points
- Some good moments created through close up shots and shot reverse shots of the protagonist's face.
- Good use of mis en scene it was very convincing at times.
- The location is used well as it is very realistic to involve a very well layed our room for a semi rich drug dealer.
- The overall title sequence is too long and becomes quite boring.
- Needs background music added since without it the sequence is even more boring.
- Some shots are too long.
- Although the location used seems relevant there are no establishing shots which is part of the convention of the title sequence form.
On the whole I believe that the feedback attained from my peers and my teacher has been very useful and I should use this to enhance the final outcome of my title sequence. However the feedback on the use of location may not be fully developed since this was deliberate as we wanted to create that claustrophobic so that we are able to place our audience in the same position as our protagonist. But we will still improve most of the other forms of feedback.
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